Department of History

The Fieldston School___________________________________________________________________

Essay Work Sheet:

Thesis and Outline

   

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Intro

topic/zinger

         

grabs reader

 

background

         

who, what, where, when

definitions

terms, movements, "isms"

 

thesis

         

why, "so what," road map

               

Body

organization

         

logical hierarchy

 

topic sent.

         

connection to thesis

 

specifics

         

dates, events, examples

 

quotes

         

choice, use

 

discussions

         

analysis

 

transitions

           
               

Concl.

restatement

           
 

expansion

         

"so what?" question

               

Insight Analysis

           

originality, critical inquiry, synthesis

Sources

           

selection and use

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